Email Subject Lines
Boost Your Open Rates
100+ emails a day. 2 seconds to convince them to click. AI helps you nail it.
Why Subject Lines Are Hard
You are trying to do too much at once:
- Grab attention
- Communicate value
- Create curiosity (not clickbait)
- Stay on brand
- Avoid spam triggers
- Fit on mobile
AI generates options fast. Test instead of agonize.
Subject Lines That Work
Curiosity Gap
- "The one thing we changed that doubled sales"
- "We were wrong about this"
- "This almost never goes on sale"
Direct Benefit
- "Save 30% on your favorites"
- "Your shipping upgrade is free"
- "New arrivals you asked for"
Urgency
- "Ends tonight: 40% off everything"
- "Last chance for holiday delivery"
- "Only 3 left in your size"
Personal
- "Sarah, we saved your cart"
- "A special thank you"
- "We noticed you left something behind"
Best subject lines combine two elements. "Sarah, your 30% off expires tonight" = personalization + urgency.
AI Prompts That Work
Basic Prompt
Write 10 subject lines for [product type] store. Email about [topic]. Target: [audience]. Voice: [tone]. Under 50 characters.
Multiple Approaches
5 curiosity-based + 5 benefit-focused subject lines for spring sale. 25% off sitewide. Avoid spam words.
Variations
I like: "Your exclusive early access starts now." Give me 10 variations keeping the exclusivity angle.
Testing
A/B Test
Send each version to 20% of list. Winner goes to remaining 60%.
What to Test
- Curiosity vs. direct
- Name vs. no name
- Short vs. longer
- Emoji vs. no emoji
- Numbers vs. no numbers
Beyond Opens
Clickbait gets opens but hurts clicks. Track conversions too.
Best Practices
Length
Mobile shows 30-35 characters. Front-load important words.
Spam Triggers
- ALL CAPS
- Excessive punctuation!!!
- "Free money," "act now"
- Fake "RE:" or "FW:"
Preview Text
Complement the subject line. Do not repeat it.
Examples by Email Type
Welcome
- "Welcome to [Brand]. Here is 10% off."
- "You are in. Let us show you around."
Abandoned Cart
- "Did you forget something?"
- "Your cart is waiting"
Sales
- "It is happening: 30% off everything"
- "Our biggest sale of the year"
Product Launch
- "Introducing [Product Name]"
- "The wait is over"
The Bottom Line
Generate 20 options in seconds. Pick the best. Test and learn.
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Clyro Team
E-commerce & AI Insights